Pushed

May 10, 2009
Tick tock goes a metronome
Buzz buzz vibrates my phone
You opened a new door
One I never saw before
You’ve shown me a possible hope
A way out that isn’t with rope

You’ve gotten me to the location
Of pure and true motivation
You’re the fire beneath my feet
Talking to you is a treat
Who you are inspires me
To everyday chase after thee

Ding dong goes your doorbell
I’m standing there looking like hell
You say give it another shot
Fight with everything, all I got
They say only the top is the winner
Yet you take me in , though I’m a sinner

You’ve gotten me to the location
Of pure and true motivation
You’re the fire beneath my feet
Talking to you is a treat
Who you are inspires me
To everyday chase after thee





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lexi10824 said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 2:49 am
I love your work! You seriously need to write more. Your pieces have soo much emotion! :) I hope that u get the girl of your dreams back. I've had similar problems..but more like a roller coaster that you don't know where it's going next.
 
Grizz_Bear replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 6:23 pm
Im back to posting the new ones should be approved and up by the end of the week probs
 
DizGillespiecanwritepoetrylikenobodysbusiness said...
May 19, 2009 at 1:30 am
Love it. Keeps a great tone that stays throughout and really portrays how she makes you feel in a way the most people just couldn't describe.
 
poettsrcool said...
May 15, 2009 at 10:59 pm
BRIAN IM SO PROUD OF YOU FOR GETTING THIS PUBLISHED!!!!
Your'e so deep its ridiculous
slash we're totally talking about this at school on monday

love you!
 
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