Pushed

May 10, 2009
By Grizz_Bear PLATINUM, Trumbull, Connecticut
Grizz_Bear PLATINUM, Trumbull, Connecticut
25 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." - Moulin Rouge
"They tell me to think outside the box, I prefer to think there is no box" - Brian Gillespie (me)


Tick tock goes a metronome
Buzz buzz vibrates my phone
You opened a new door
One I never saw before
You’ve shown me a possible hope
A way out that isn’t with rope

You’ve gotten me to the location
Of pure and true motivation
You’re the fire beneath my feet
Talking to you is a treat
Who you are inspires me
To everyday chase after thee

Ding dong goes your doorbell
I’m standing there looking like hell
You say give it another shot
Fight with everything, all I got
They say only the top is the winner
Yet you take me in , though I’m a sinner

You’ve gotten me to the location
Of pure and true motivation
You’re the fire beneath my feet
Talking to you is a treat
Who you are inspires me
To everyday chase after thee


The author's comments:
I lost the girl of my dreams

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on Apr. 12 2010 at 6:23 pm
Grizz_Bear PLATINUM, Trumbull, Connecticut
25 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." - Moulin Rouge
"They tell me to think outside the box, I prefer to think there is no box" - Brian Gillespie (me)

Im back to posting the new ones should be approved and up by the end of the week probs

on Jul. 1 2009 at 2:49 am
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 69 comments
I love your work! You seriously need to write more. Your pieces have soo much emotion! :) I hope that u get the girl of your dreams back. I've had similar problems..but more like a roller coaster that you don't know where it's going next.

on May. 19 2009 at 1:30 am
Love it. Keeps a great tone that stays throughout and really portrays how she makes you feel in a way the most people just couldn't describe.

poettsrcool said...
on May. 15 2009 at 10:59 pm
BRIAN IM SO PROUD OF YOU FOR GETTING THIS PUBLISHED!!!!

Your'e so deep its ridiculous

slash we're totally talking about this at school on monday



love you!


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