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May 11, 2009
By brewcrew#44 SILVER, Kanab, Utah
brewcrew#44 SILVER, Kanab, Utah
7 articles 10 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Courage is being scared to death but saddling up anyway”
John Wayne


Her eyes are blue.
She is always true.
Her hair is blonde.
Every day I grow more and more fond.
She’s only five foot three.
But she has a really strong hold on me.
The day she fell, I was going to hell.
As she lies there on the ground, you could feel a faint heart pound.
When it stopped and her eyes closed, she looked like an angel at piece.
When I felt again it was gone.
She was in a pose.
Her eyes so calm and soothing the whole time I wish you were still moving.
The day her heart stopped is the day I dropped.
I don’t feel anymore, since the day she had to walk out the door.
So now all I do is work and lie on the floor, and wish she was still in my arms.
Instead she just sits up there and watches over me.


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on Sep. 29 2009 at 6:19 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Wow, this is such a sad poem! Like julian said you have so much talent! :)

on Sep. 18 2009 at 11:05 am
brewcrew#44 SILVER, Kanab, Utah
7 articles 10 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Courage is being scared to death but saddling up anyway”
John Wayne

you should look at some of my other work it is a little better

julian GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 2:44 pm
julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
The goal is not about living forever, the goal is about creating something that can.

Ooh, that's a sad poem. It's really great though,and I think you definitely have talent! Keep it up! Can you please check out my poems as well? I need feedback. Thanks


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