May 11, 2009
Her eyes are blue.
She is always true.
Her hair is blonde.
Every day I grow more and more fond.
She’s only five foot three.
But she has a really strong hold on me.
The day she fell, I was going to hell.
As she lies there on the ground, you could feel a faint heart pound.
When it stopped and her eyes closed, she looked like an angel at piece.
When I felt again it was gone.
She was in a pose.
Her eyes so calm and soothing the whole time I wish you were still moving.
The day her heart stopped is the day I dropped.
I don’t feel anymore, since the day she had to walk out the door.
So now all I do is work and lie on the floor, and wish she was still in my arms.
Instead she just sits up there and watches over me.

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distant_dreamer said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 6:19 pm
Wow, this is such a sad poem! Like julian said you have so much talent! :)
julian This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 2:44 pm
Ooh, that's a sad poem. It's really great though,and I think you definitely have talent! Keep it up! Can you please check out my poems as well? I need feedback. Thanks
mbrewer replied...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 11:05 am
you should look at some of my other work it is a little better
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