May 10, 2009
By marissa GOLD, New Castle, Pennsylvania
marissa GOLD, New Castle, Pennsylvania
14 articles 0 photos 6 comments

the rain is pouring down on me now, i cant breth i cant sleep all i can hear is the sound of my heart ready to break through my chest, its like a rush of adrenaline running through my veins. the drugs are getting to me, its like i can hear you when your not even saying anything. i can see you but your not even there, i can feel you so close even when your not even around. the drugs are taking over me , i am about to let go of everything and say goodbye to my life, its all over and its time to say goodbye just say goodbye to you...

The author's comments:
this piece is about a women who got caught up into drugs all careless and starts to go crazy because she isnt sure if whats happening is really happening or not.

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on May. 27 2009 at 2:51 am
Cassie PLATINUM, Delisle, Other
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I REALLY like ur poem. It has so much emotion stuck inside it that it fills me with passion! And I'm normally a total heartless b****!

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