Meant To Be MAG

May 9, 2009
By Rebkha Michael SILVER, Ossining, New York
Rebkha Michael SILVER, Ossining, New York
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There are some things
Feelings
Scenes
That cannot be
Bought
Cannot be
Stolen
And are natural rights
To all

Like the first spring day
The first
Real
Spring day
When the air is light on your tongue
You feel like all the weight
Stress
And uncertainty
Has been lifted off your shoulders

Or in the night
Not too cold
But cool
When you're all alone
But not lonely
And as you run
Across the field
And feel the wind
Slide across your face
And see the moonlight, and stars
Focusing
Watching
Over you

Or the first time
The pool is opened
And you slip your body in
Gasping at the cold water
And at your
Stiff joints
But you keep moving
And swim

Like you were born
In the water
Like you were
Meant to be
Here


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on Jan. 4 2010 at 9:36 pm
sillypixxi SILVER, Phx, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
" every day is the end of the world for someone"

i am re-expeiriencing every moment i had as i read this, somehow memories take over. Everyone has had these moments but they are somehow forgotten yet the most important things. they are they things that build us into what we are, its great that you acknowledged that not many people would take a second look at those "meaningless" little memories

8thGemini GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 6:35 pm
8thGemini GOLD, Corning, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Don't cross oceans for people who wouldn't jump puddles for you.

haha nice comment on the Meant To Be Poem. Come on you can put a little more into those you're a writer!

8thGemini GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 6:33 pm
8thGemini GOLD, Corning, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Don't cross oceans for people who wouldn't jump puddles for you.

It was really good! great natrual flow and awesome wording but where the words were placed made it even better

on Jan. 4 2010 at 5:09 pm
iheartchocolate SILVER, Montclair, New Jersey
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Are you the author

on Jan. 4 2010 at 5:08 pm
iheartchocolate SILVER, Montclair, New Jersey
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OMG r u a perfesional or sumthin? That wz awesome! It was very meaningful. Anymore?

Cfaith2 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 9:50 pm
Cfaith2 BRONZE, Kitty Hawk, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh when you can,
Apologize when you should,
And let go of what you can't change.
Kiss slowly,
Play hard,
Forgive quickly,
Take chances,
Give everything
And have no regrets.
Life's too short to be anything but happy <3
- Audrey Hepburn

i love it! it's a great poem, wonderful job!

on Jan. 1 2010 at 5:46 pm
abeatlesfan65 GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My greatest trouble is getting the curtain up and down." - T.S. Eliot

One measely comment?! This deserves more... great job on an amazing poem!

Katie[: GOLD said...
on May. 15 2009 at 12:53 pm
Katie[: GOLD, Columbus, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life to the fullest, and like there won't be a tomorrow."

That was really good. It has a true meaning.


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