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Listen to me.
I've lost myself in you...
and I'm so deep within your soul that I can't find my way out.
I'm still trapped in your light brown eyes...
&& ironically still blinded by the mere sight of you.
listen to me.
I'm not the same girl that I used to be.
I've lost my character.
I don't sing, I don't laugh...
no, not like I used to.
this is what you did to me...
so unexpectedly...
listen to me.
I was real.
my heart had a skipped in your presence...
my mind functioned correctly...until you left.
listen to me.
it was never supposed to be like this.
I wasn't supposed to care.
but...I did.
...&& I still do.
listen to me.
you don't know how many times you appear in my thoughts...
in dreams...
you're practically inescapable.
listen to me.
I still wonder until this very day where those "feelings" went.
things were finally becoming "ideal"
and then you left...and I lost...
I lost you...

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Jenigansta said...
May 20, 2009 at 1:18 am
Ummmmm..... don't listen to whoever said those are just feelings from a break up there what you feel and expressed yourself to poetry in a way some people are not as talanted as you are.
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