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CuTe
May 7, 2009
In all the chaotic confussion that surounds my spinning mind,
Ear splitting silence.
Can't think.
Can't move.
Can't take it anymore.
It's more of just a blue stage
Sometimes it's more than just a bit of pain
Sometimes it's more than a heart break
mind-
soul break.
Shattered reflections in pools or crimson
from lush bubbles that form with
a precise sick beauty,
you can't get enough.
It's numbing.
It's hard candy.
A whisper to a scream.
All in still silence
This is cute
without the E.
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MarleyRainbow PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 2:53 pm
cute without the E is my fav line, it is just so amazing the way you capture everything in one little poem.
Missundrstoodx2 said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 3:41 am
i had to re-read this once you revealed the catch in the last two lines which is such a powerful way to write...great articulations of the struggle...hopefully words will become your most powerful way to cope in the future.
swiftheart GOLD said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 9:33 am
I agree, the poem is powerful however, the title brings down its value.
SqueakyLove BRONZE said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 4:52 pm
When I saw yhe title i didnt think much of the poem but now i read it i can feel n how powerful it is! GREAT WORK!!
RhythmAndRhyme BRONZE said...
on Aug. 4 2011 at 5:47 pm
This was so pwerful! I've now read all of your poems. They're all so moving, so filled with a certain feeling, a certain passion...very cool to read! Keep on truckin'!
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 1:31 am
i loved this!! especially the end this is cute without an e!! :)
Hotaru said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 7:11 pm
I just finished reading your poems and they both seem to represent so much feeling. It always amazes me when I find a writier who can write a poem like you. The emotion and imagery is like a rude awakening compared to a lot of the bad writing on this website. (That would be me) :) I really wish you would write more! I added your peoms to my collection of great peoms I've read. Don't worry, I won't claim it as my own. (Not that anyone would believe I had wrote it!) Anyways, I am begging you to write more because I would love to read what you have and I would definitely give you my honest opinion on what you write. I know how hard it is to find a person who will honestly comment on what you write. (Well, at least that has always been my case.) Thanks! Again, please write more!!!
searbear180 said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 9:04 pm
you r an amazing writer! i love ur wording. it makes u feel like ur there.
starxoxo23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 8:02 pm
This is amazing. You have some serious talent and I can totally relate to the feelings you're describing.
This poem has a lot of detail and perfect imagery. It really grabs onto you until the very last line. There is one thing that I noticed, 'confussion' is spelled confusion. You are a very great writer, this poem really speaks to me. Keep sharing your talent with the world.
Dren12 said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 4:27 pm
I absolutely love this poem....:) you have serious talent
celloizmylife PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 3:54 pm
This is really good, but I creepily sense you're referring to cutting yourself... pleaz don't go there. It's the dark path of the low road.
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