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Somedays I feel so empty, so lost,
Alone in an endless universe.
Feeling like no one understands, and nobody's crossed
To where I'm really at.
I try to explain what I feel,
But everyone pushes me away.
I'm left alone and I try to heal,
But it just gets worse.
I can't take it any longer,
Yet I have a choice.
Do I bury my feelings, or push out stronger?
Can I tell the world, and hope that someone understands?
Or do I push it down deeper and try to move on.





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Robyn97 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 12:00 pm
Some days the same thing happens to me; it's a toss up whether it gets pushed down, or told. :) Love the poem itself, too.
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 6:41 pm
i love it! i feel the same :) 5/5
 
ZAVERY said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 12:35 pm
Oh wow! Such a passionate poem, Julian! I love the empathy and description you put into this poem in such short words. Keep it up!
 
nicole11 said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 7:35 pm
thats an awsome poem. i feal like that all the time. like no one cares and that nobody understands. keep writing
 
mbrewer said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 11:23 am
thats a good poem and if you need to talk im here for you
 
PK4evr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 18, 2009 at 3:08 am
Beautiful! (mostly kuz it's short, sweet, and to the point.) Good job, and thanks for your comment on my poem :)
 
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