Lost

May 7, 2009
By julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
17 articles 17 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
The goal is not about living forever, the goal is about creating something that can.


Somedays I feel so empty, so lost,
Alone in an endless universe.
Feeling like no one understands, and nobody's crossed
To where I'm really at.
I try to explain what I feel,
But everyone pushes me away.
I'm left alone and I try to heal,
But it just gets worse.
I can't take it any longer,
Yet I have a choice.
Do I bury my feelings, or push out stronger?
Can I tell the world, and hope that someone understands?
Or do I push it down deeper and try to move on.



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Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 12:00 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Some days the same thing happens to me; it's a toss up whether it gets pushed down, or told. :) Love the poem itself, too.

on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:41 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i love it! i feel the same :) 5/5

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 12:35 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Oh wow! Such a passionate poem, Julian! I love the empathy and description you put into this poem in such short words. Keep it up!

on Nov. 15 2009 at 7:35 pm
nicole11 BRONZE, Onsted, Michigan
1 article 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every 60 seconds you spend upset is a minute of happiness you can never get back

thats an awsome poem. i feal like that all the time. like no one cares and that nobody understands. keep writing

on Sep. 2 2009 at 11:23 am
brewcrew#44 SILVER, Kanab, Utah
7 articles 10 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Courage is being scared to death but saddling up anyway”
John Wayne

thats a good poem and if you need to talk im here for you

PK4evr ELITE said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 3:08 am
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

Beautiful! (mostly kuz it's short, sweet, and to the point.) Good job, and thanks for your comment on my poem :)




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