May 7, 2009
By brittany prisco BRONZE, Spring Hill, Florida
brittany prisco BRONZE, Spring Hill, Florida
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I feel smaller and smaller.

Walls are closing around me.

Time slowly ticks by without warning.

The only sound I can hear is the pounding of my heart and my breathing quickening with insanity.

Tears start welling in my already swollen eyes and my cheeks start overheating.

Black emptiness starts creeping up on me.

The light starts to melt and the darkness laughs its way in.

The pain is too excruciating and my fears are rising.

Panic storms throughout my fragile veins and frustration found a way into my eyes.

Losing you took a toll on my own pathetic life.

Living won't ever be the same anymore and life is now pointless.

I feel smaller and smaller.

The author's comments:
I got hurt so many times in my life by guys. So I decided to write a poem about it to let my anger and frustration out. I added more drama than there needed to be in it to give it an emotional effect.

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on Nov. 15 2009 at 7:32 pm
nicole11 BRONZE, Onsted, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Every 60 seconds you spend upset is a minute of happiness you can never get back

this is a really good poem. it had really good description. I LOVED it

on Jul. 28 2009 at 4:09 pm
awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground"
~Theordore Roosevelt

really sad but i liked it! you have a talent for portraying emotions. keep it up! ~i'd love any comments you have on my poems and stories~

julian GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2009 at 3:45 pm
julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
17 articles 17 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
The goal is not about living forever, the goal is about creating something that can.

Thats a really good poem, very dramatic and emotional, yet great! That just really sucks that guys treat you harshly! Very nice, keep up the good work! P.S If you can, please check out my poems as well, thanks!


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