April 19, 2009
By giggleygabberz101 SILVER, Surfside, Florida
giggleygabberz101 SILVER, Surfside, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

When I see you
I feel my heart
hit my stomach
My eyes water
My body feels

I would feel
butterflies fluttering.
My heart pounding with
burning cheeks
and as if I was on top of the world

Now I feel
broken and lost
My head,
lost and not found
my feelings are confused
Who caused this
One word:

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Whitney GOLD said...
on May. 15 2009 at 5:08 pm
Whitney GOLD, Carlisle, Indiana
11 articles 17 photos 13 comments
I know how that is. I can really relate to that. Great poem.

on May. 14 2009 at 6:49 pm
Bradley_F. SILVER, Memphis, Tennessee
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments
good job. I have felt heartbreak so many times I cant count them on my fingers, thumbs, and toes. :-)

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