When you.....

By jo-jo, Hammond, IN

You ruin who i am inside
When you look at me
Its like you control my mind
When you beat me
You leave me gasping for air
When you ignore me
I feel like pulling my hair
When you cut me
You leave me screaming in pain
When you starve me
My hate for you gains
When you yell at me
You make me feel insecure
When you touch me
You make me feel unpure

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831ily13 said...
May 31, 2009 at 5:37 pm:

<3n it!!!!!! its as beautiful as......as..... wow.

jo-jo replied...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 6:31 pm :

thank you very much

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Lovrboy said...
May 17, 2009 at 7:29 pm:

thankyou you for all your great comments.

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be_silent said...
May 14, 2009 at 3:35 pm:

wow, that really speaks to me. i dont really get if your speaking about a relationship or real abuse at home. but either way it makes sense. ive delt with the same things, ur writing is really good.

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devils gangsta said...
May 14, 2009 at 4:34 am:

i like ur work its really good for u being a guy an all. i dont see much guys that can write poems like u. i really like ur work keep it up

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Twilightnme said...
May 14, 2009 at 12:16 am:

Oh my goodness! This is so touching. I really am in love with your art. I just can't get over it! Your amazing!

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FruitLoop said...
May 13, 2009 at 11:41 pm:

wow....beautiful.

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:PBUBBLES:P said...
May 13, 2009 at 9:48 pm:

OMG! That was another heart-wrenching poem, so dark and deadly sad and dark. More wonderful rhyming, it has an amazing rhythm. This should be in the magazine.

jo-jo replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 12:44 pm :

yeah actually teenink send me a letter saying my poems in a book^^