Peace is Not Hope , Brothership is

May 7, 2009
By writer2b PLATINUM, Montville, New Jersey
writer2b PLATINUM, Montville, New Jersey
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Hope is just a wish....brothership is a sign that peace is coming.


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on May. 18 2009 at 9:50 pm
StarrixSunshine SILVER, East Killingly, Connecticut
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You say my work is very good, I still have much to learn about writing. FIrst off, I tell too much, I can't show things as well. I need to get a bit more discriptive. And lastly, my teacher said that I leave the reader with absolutely no hope in the end! XD It's like, well, it's a murder story! It isn't sunhine and rainbows ^_^ I like this piece too!



-Jess-

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