The Keeper

May 6, 2009
By Lisa Hoegler BRONZE, Delray Beach, Florida
Lisa Hoegler BRONZE, Delray Beach, Florida
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Why are you still here?
Why don't you just go?
No one wants you!
Execept for the keeper that still wants to hold.

You are so insecure.
You're so full of lies.
It obviously seems,
We are telling you goodbye.

What the keeper says.
What the keeper will do.
I just hope and pray,
The keeper will get rid of you!

Now at the end,
Of every give and take.
Your making,
A very regretful mistake.

The author's comments:
So I am new to this website, and my friend is making me put something on here.
A few days ago, I told her she was lucky to be able to have something she's good at (writing). She told me you write, how you feel. And then she made me sit and write. She said it came out pretty good, but I'm still a little insecure about it. Basically I think it's terrible. But she is making me do this, so enjoy.

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on Aug. 11 2009 at 5:53 pm
anonymousfish BRONZE, Wentzville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Like I always say, there is no 'I' in TEAM... there's a 'ME' though, if you jumble it up. -House

i liked your poem. i just started too, iv only published one poem so far, not very many people hav read it, but that dosen't bother me. i enjoy reading other people's work.




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