So Much More

May 6, 2009
By trackkk92 SILVER, Pawtucket, Rhode Island
trackkk92 SILVER, Pawtucket, Rhode Island
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This mask,
Covering up my true identity;
The only thing keeping me from being me.
To remove it,
Is to break free.
Anyone care to help me?

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EdytD SILVER said...
on May. 14 2009 at 12:37 am
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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it's neat, and the idea has potential. Personally, I would make it longer - describe the elaborately painted mask, describe the torment at both sides, but put some emotion in the poem that the reader can relate to. It can become an amazing poem, though even if you leave it, it's still good.

I'd love if you took a look at my poetry. thanks! :D


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