What Lies Beneath?

May 4, 2009
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What lies beneath
the optimism
and the smiles
that are only there
when I'm around who I care about?

What lies beneath
the darkness
that only exists
to those who are nothing?

What lies beneath
who I am
when the other parts of me
aren't there?
Who am I?

What lies beneath
Beneath the part of me
that I don't even recognize
or acknowledge?

Which part of me
is the truth?
Which part of me
will remain
when adolesence is gone?

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AnXearlyXending said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 1:02 am
Thanks for the comment on my poem!
Your is really good, it shows that there is more to people than meets the eye!
Your awesome for the comment and five stars for the awesome poem!
WriterofWhatsInside said...
May 11, 2009 at 10:22 pm
hey this is awesome!
thanks for reading my poem (5 times haha)!
5 more poems are up! plz read!
good job with this one keep it UP!
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