hate

May 3, 2009
By daisydee123 SILVER, Gotham City, Illinois
daisydee123 SILVER, Gotham City, Illinois
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what does hate do?
does it make you feel good?
will it help you in life?
Will you gain anything?
does it make you happy?
will it prevent you from the thing you hate?
no.
hate .
we dont gain anything from it
it just gives us a bad feeling inside.
its not a stop signal
its really a go singnal
it just brings those emotins more harshly.
hate doesnt help.
hate makes worse.


The author's comments:
i wanted people to realize that hate hurts you more than the thing you hate.

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on Sep. 12 2009 at 11:02 am
daisydee1234 BRONZE, Gotam City, California
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thx!!! ps im am daisydee123 but somthing went wrong w/ my account!!! oh no! so if you want to reach me plz comment on this account!

KaylaAnne GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2009 at 11:07 pm
KaylaAnne GOLD, North Platte, Nebraska
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hey, ur work is awesome! I love how u really know how to get the point across. I completely agree with this poem.

on Aug. 8 2009 at 6:01 pm
daisydee123 SILVER, Gotham City, Illinois
5 articles 19 photos 66 comments
more people should comment!!!!!!!

xanadu123 said...
on May. 30 2009 at 3:38 pm
xanadu123, San Francisco, California
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this is really good i like it! i cant believe ur rob pattinsons 2 cousin that is soooooo cool what is it like ? is he your friend? do u talk to him???

on May. 19 2009 at 12:45 am
brokenbutterfly SILVER, Lancaster, Pennsylvania
6 articles 1 photo 12 comments
very nice, I posted tips on my poem called When I was happy so you can check them out. I hope they help and keep writing

on May. 14 2009 at 8:19 pm
thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
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nice... u might consider rereading your work though.. just some advice to help you become the best you can be!!! :)


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