May 3, 2009
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what does hate do?
does it make you feel good?
will it help you in life?
Will you gain anything?
does it make you happy?
will it prevent you from the thing you hate?
hate .
we dont gain anything from it
it just gives us a bad feeling inside.
its not a stop signal
its really a go singnal
it just brings those emotins more harshly.
hate doesnt help.
hate makes worse.

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ckalani said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 11:07 pm
hey, ur work is awesome! I love how u really know how to get the point across. I completely agree with this poem.
Diana S. replied...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 11:02 am
thx!!! ps im am daisydee123 but somthing went wrong w/ my account!!! oh no! so if you want to reach me plz comment on this account!
daisydee123 said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 6:01 pm
more people should comment!!!!!!!
xanadu123 said...
May 30, 2009 at 3:38 pm
this is really good i like it! i cant believe ur rob pattinsons 2 cousin that is soooooo cool what is it like ? is he your friend? do u talk to him???
crushed<3 said...
May 19, 2009 at 12:45 am
very nice, I posted tips on my poem called When I was happy so you can check them out. I hope they help and keep writing
thedaydreamer13 said...
May 14, 2009 at 8:19 pm
nice... u might consider rereading your work though.. just some advice to help you become the best you can be!!! :)
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