Victim

May 3, 2009
By EleanorRigby PLATINUM, New York City, New York
EleanorRigby PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The optomist proclaims we live in the best of worlds, and the pessimist fears this is true." - James Branch Cabell


I analyze myself
My thoughts, categorized.
I am my own psychologist.
I become more distant
From my emotional self
And take the mind of my observer.
My thoughts, categorized, are dull
And then there’s only blank.
No more victim, only doctor.
Doctor, my helper, who spares me
From my emotional self.
And I am in the mind of my observer.
Speak and diagnose, repair.
Seek and find, heal.
There are labels, no exceptional feelings.
Because my thoughts are categorized.
And I am distant from my self.
Leave behind the victim, doctor.
Just speak, seek
Diagnose, and fix.
Because then there’s only blank, doctor.
Doctor, my helper, my self.
My self, analyzed.



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on Apr. 17 2010 at 5:49 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

wow this is incredible. so deep. ur very talented! plz keep writing xD

on Jun. 12 2009 at 4:01 am
write4life GOLD, Macon, Georgia
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wow...i don't know what to say. i'm trying to think of some kind of feedback that would help you, but nothing's coming to me. i absolutely loved it. this poem is me. this is exactly how i think, but i can never find the right words to say what i'm thinking or feeling. this is how i want to write. it's definitely an inspiration!!

on May. 11 2009 at 9:08 pm
EleanorRigby PLATINUM, New York City, New York
28 articles 3 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The optomist proclaims we live in the best of worlds, and the pessimist fears this is true." - James Branch Cabell

i really need some feedback so comment away everybody!


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