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My Sister's Smile

May 3, 2009
By thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
3 articles 6 photos 40 comments

When my sister smiles the sun comes out
For she is the sunlight of my life

When her face shines bright it shows love and kindness
It beams from her from morning to night

Joy and hugs come from her wonderful smile
It shines brightly for miles and miles

For she is my only sister
For she is the sunlight of my life


The author's comments:
This story i wrote is for my sister. I was able to puplish this story in the 2008 book... 'a celebration of poets'. thank you so much for reading!

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lolawashere said...
on May. 31 2019 at 3:21 pm
lolawashere, Shelton, Washington
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Love this poem

chethu said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 12:23 am
i realy liked the poem so mutch i can feel the love towrds ur sister...i to have a loveing sister

on Apr. 1 2010 at 3:48 pm
thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
3 articles 6 photos 40 comments
thxs for commenting! i will have to come take a look at some of your work soon!

on Aug. 23 2009 at 5:46 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i think your sister should be honored that you wrote a great poem like this :) it's great, has a lot of depth and meaning, great content, good formatting. it's all around very good :) well done! check out some of my work and comment/rate, i love the comments!

on Jun. 20 2009 at 4:48 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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that was really cute and repeating the 2nd line gave it all the more significance. now i wish i had a sister like your's. the poem is so happyful (:

on Jun. 14 2009 at 12:26 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

awwwwwwww, that is sweet. This piece is beautiful.

on May. 16 2009 at 3:03 pm
daisydee123 SILVER, Gotham City, Illinois
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wow this is really good its awesome that you love your sister soooo much! thanks for the comment i will use the tip on future poetry. thanks! keep up the good work!

on May. 13 2009 at 7:43 pm
thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
3 articles 6 photos 40 comments
thanks for reading!! i hope you post your comments to help me become a getter writer!!

piratequeen said...
on May. 12 2009 at 8:07 pm
i think this poem is awsome!! this should be #1!! great job monica... keep up the good work. P.S. i know you will... quink quink! hehe

on May. 11 2009 at 10:14 pm
bookhugger14 SILVER, Delta, Ohio
7 articles 1 photo 32 comments
awww! how sweet sounds like someone loves their sister a lot. i like the rhyme scheme. keep on writing girlie!


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