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A Wedding

The loud roar of the
Awaiting crowd,
Just a quiet hum to her
Delicate ears.

In her own peaceful world
She quietly sits,
Ready to meet with her love,
Her wedding, a dance,
Each step a gentle kiss.

True love ready to
Unleash itself
With the movement
Of her feet.

Quietly she sits backstage,
Preparing her shoes
For her
Masterpiece.

So much strength
Held in a
Fragile form.
Breathe.
One moment of silence
As she dances onto
Her stage.



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livelovesmileThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 10:14 am:
This is beautiful, I am a dancer as well. Please read and comment on my poetry if you have a chance, as I would really appreciate it. Thanks!
 
Scribbler-of-Dreams This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 7:57 am :
This is beautiful!
 
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Schubster said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 4:24 pm:
so beautiful and rhythmical. love it. please read mine...I'd love a comment from a poet like you.
 
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Amber1994 said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 3:45 pm:
O MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS POEM!! I use this writing style also, and I think it helps put more emotion and sensory details into my writing. Great job! -please chek out my poems and comment-
 
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bookhugger14 said...
Jun. 4, 2009 at 9:10 pm:
beautiful poem!!! lovely description!!! i love it :)
 
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Abreika said...
May 21, 2009 at 8:24 pm:
i like this poem you should keep up the good work and don't let nothing atop you!!!!
 
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