All I Want

May 2, 2009
By EmilyPaige PLATINUM, Morris Plains, New Jersey
EmilyPaige PLATINUM, Morris Plains, New Jersey
20 articles 2 photos 8 comments

All I want is something amazing. Or someONE amazing.

All I want is someone that I can love, without that person being in my family.

All I want is someone that can hold me and I feel like nothing else is happening around us.

All I want is someone who I can run up to with tears streaming down my face and the first thing he says is "Alright, whose a** am I kicking?"

All I want is someone who I can't get enough of them and I want more.

All I want is someone who I love so much that, when we break the kiss, my heart hurts.

All I want is for my karma to grant me with Mr. Right. But what if that never happens? What if Mr. Right is off living somewhere with prince charming...?



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on Aug. 25 2009 at 3:13 pm
KinseyLlama BRONZE, Hoover, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may just be one person, but to one person, you may just be the world.

Kewl! I liked it :)

amyxu said...
on Jul. 2 2009 at 9:47 pm
Hey I was browsing Teen Ink and I came across your poem. I like the rhythm to it, it sounds so natural! One suggestion: in the phrase "someone who I can't get enough of them" it may work better to take out the "them." It's just a little distracting and redundant. Only a suggestion, though. Anyway, good job and keep writing!


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