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Past, Present, and Future

Past
My love for you is done
For you have never loved me
Three, two, none
Our love shall never be

Present
Right now we are good friends
You’re in love with one of mine
Oh I wish and wish and wish
That I could turn back the hands of time

Future
My future does not contain you
Nor does yours me
We’re good friends, to the end
But our love shall never be




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pedrozag said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 11:21 pm:
rhyming doesn't matter, it just makes the poems get more structure. my poems rhyme not cuz i want them to but b/c i hear the protagonist say it like this. Hm... gooed concept, good form, syllabic rhythm a bit off but i still like the message.
 
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-xlimitless239x- said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 2:25 am:
i wrote it, just so u know. check the statz. rate my poem plz!:)
 
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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 14, 2009 at 12:08 am:
The concept of this piece is very strong. Although, I feel as if the rhyming is a little bit off on the flow. But i love it!
 
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alayapoetgirl said...
May 18, 2009 at 6:43 pm:
I really like this one. Its very deep.......
 
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