Past, Present, and Future

May 2, 2009
By -xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
-xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
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Past
My love for you is done
For you have never loved me
Three, two, none
Our love shall never be

Present
Right now we are good friends
You’re in love with one of mine
Oh I wish and wish and wish
That I could turn back the hands of time

Future
My future does not contain you
Nor does yours me
We’re good friends, to the end
But our love shall never be

The author's comments:
this is actually what happened. hope you liked it. check out my other poems:
Too Bad
Wind, Fire, and Water
THE END
Ugly Duckling
Ice Cold Her
The A, B, C's of Love

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on Jul. 1 2009 at 11:21 pm
darkangel1326 GOLD, Paramount, California
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rhyming doesn't matter, it just makes the poems get more structure. my poems rhyme not cuz i want them to but b/c i hear the protagonist say it like this. Hm... gooed concept, good form, syllabic rhythm a bit off but i still like the message.

on Jun. 25 2009 at 2:25 am
-xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
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i wrote it, just so u know. check the statz. rate my poem plz!:)

on Jun. 14 2009 at 12:08 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

The concept of this piece is very strong. Although, I feel as if the rhyming is a little bit off on the flow. But i love it!

on May. 18 2009 at 6:43 pm
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

I really like this one. Its very deep.......


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