Pain Always fades

May 1, 2009
By Monae2013 SILVER, TRACY, California
Monae2013 SILVER, TRACY, California
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Internal pain sinks and spreads,
It makes you feel as though you were dead.
You feel so lonely,
As if your heart were bleeding slowly.

Everyone around you seems to parish,
They say that you were being careless.
Now the pain in your body begins to ache,
You're so desperate to know your death date.

Then someone comes along and says "Hi, my name is All Ways Ted".
Still in pain you try and smile,
You're cold and sad plus out of style.

He grabs your hand and makes you write,
You feel your body gain some life.
Now you can finally see the light.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Jun. 20 2009 at 4:59 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 298 comments
hey, nice rhyming, although I think it might've been better if you kept up the pattern. it's still good and it's great that you suggest writing helps lift emotional stress or pain (:

lu said...
on May. 16 2009 at 6:04 pm
wow that was deep, but I thought pain lets us know that you are still alive even though it is not pleasant. keep up the good work


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