pooh bear

May 4, 2009
By jazzyt95 SILVER, Ozone Park, New York
jazzyt95 SILVER, Ozone Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"i want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into" quote by Alexander Sterling


pooh is sweet
pooh is mellow
he is a cute loving fellow
he is really kind
but also have in mind
HE IS YOURS


The author's comments:
to mom and best friend maryann

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on Feb. 26 2010 at 5:33 pm
PaperPlanes BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything has beauty, but not everyone can see it." -Confuscious

Hey, cute little poem. Very simple. Remember, the first letter of a line on a poem should be capitalized. Overall pretty nice, but if you'd like to improve, maybe next time try using flowery words. Expanding your poems' vocabulary will do wonders for you. Good job. :)

on Feb. 1 2010 at 4:22 pm
SmileyFace94 SILVER, Queens, New York
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aww how cute! i know mar loves this. what inspired you to write this?


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