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pooh is sweet
pooh is mellow
he is a cute loving fellow
he is really kind
but also have in mind
HE IS YOURS





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SmileyFace94 said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 4:22 pm
aww how cute! i know mar loves this. what inspired you to write this?
 
PaperPlanes replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 5:33 pm
Hey, cute little poem. Very simple. Remember, the first letter of a line on a poem should be capitalized. Overall pretty nice, but if you'd like to improve, maybe next time try using flowery words. Expanding your poems' vocabulary will do wonders for you. Good job. :)
 
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