My Tears Are Deadly

Broken,confused,battered and bruised
Heartbroken and torn thrown away and misused thrown against a wall you watch me as i fall crying silently screaming so loud my tears are deadly my blood so cold frozen and speechless is my feelings that run deep. no one understands how it is to be me.





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BlackLeaf said...
May 12, 2009 at 1:32 am
this is really good!
please check my work!
especially all of those who have read this.
 
breezer11 said...
May 11, 2009 at 8:19 pm
your amazing please write more, and rate my work (im not good at writing)
 
Hales said...
May 11, 2009 at 4:30 pm
thats absolutely amazing i love it
 
Amaranth said...
May 11, 2009 at 7:01 pm
Wow! What a way to experiment with improper grammar and free verse. Very powerful.
Care to check out mine?
 
Natasha2457 said...
May 10, 2009 at 3:20 am
Dang ! Yu Mad Good !
 
nxexnxaxj said...
May 10, 2009 at 1:13 am
i think dis is rlly good =]
 
blackamethyst said...
May 9, 2009 at 1:15 am
deep and insightful... keep writing
 
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