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May 1, 2009
By Sarah Jacobs BRONZE, Drexel, Missouri
Sarah Jacobs BRONZE, Drexel, Missouri
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True love is patient,
true love is kind.
True love is two hearts intertwined.
True love is tender,
true love is pure.
True love is never insecure,
True love is always meant to be.
True love was made for you and me.



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on May. 11 2009 at 1:25 am
MisunderstoodBeauty BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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really beautiful poem i love it, ur a really great writer. it makes me happy...... excellent job!!!!!

on May. 10 2009 at 11:51 pm
SagaLiSela PLATINUM, Boonsboro, Maryland
27 articles 27 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you."

Simple as that.

Or not that simple.

Wow! Nice rhythm. It's catchy.

on May. 10 2009 at 11:21 pm
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
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really simple, but cute :)



comment back ? thanks

on May. 10 2009 at 10:24 pm
Babybluelove1 SILVER, Clyde, Texas
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loved it sooooooo very much!!!!!!

on May. 10 2009 at 5:51 pm
Miss.Bliss1 BRONZE, Scotsburn, Other
3 articles 5 photos 46 comments
So sweet and simple. Awsome job...keep writeing!

dot.! BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2009 at 2:17 am
dot.! BRONZE, Acworth, Georgia
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wow! i totally love it!! keep writing and don't stop!!!

i'd like to know ur opinion on my poem too, so leave a comment if u can plz! thanxx!

TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped/

on May. 10 2009 at 1:09 am
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

AMAZING!!! This really flows and rhymes well, and has a good rhythm. I love it, so simple, short, and meaningful!

Seth1 BRONZE said...
on May. 9 2009 at 8:37 pm
Seth1 BRONZE, Republic, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't really have any.

this is good i like it!:D i like to write about love

please check out mine called remember! :)

on May. 9 2009 at 5:06 pm
Meleah17 SILVER, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All the best people are, mad" -Alice in wonderland

i love your poem keep up the good work!

on May. 9 2009 at 1:20 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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romantic and sweet