A hearts wings

May 1, 2009
A heart wings spreads for miles,
They get rid of all these vicious cycles.
They always bring in truth.
And they act like angels not making any spoofs.
Hearts wings takes away the lies,
Is this why they say love never dies?
When you're in pain,
Hearts wings tell you your not insane.
It's never your brain,
That only Helps to keep you sane.
Think of how the world would be,
If it had no love or truth that you could see.
Think of what that would do,
If nothing said came out true.
This is what heart's wings are without you.
Heart's wings, they bring in truth from all that lies.
Spreading for miles not letting you die.





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Amaranth said...
May 11, 2009 at 7:06 pm
It's good, but I feel you can even experiment more with the rhythm. Some grammatical errors, but nevertheless, original concept about heart wings.
Care to comment on mine? Thanks.
 
MisunderstoodBeauty said...
May 11, 2009 at 1:26 am
love it!!!
 
jennnnnnn This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2009 at 11:24 pm
i love the message of your poem, i think its very unique how you saying that our hearts' wings bring out the truth in us.

i think with a little bit of practice/experimentation with rhythm, you'd definitely be a very talented poet!

itd be nice if you could check out my stuff too ! thanks :)
 
:PBUBBLES:P said...
May 10, 2009 at 9:53 pm
AMAZING!!! This is wonderful!! I like heart wings. Never thought about them even existing before, so really original, wonderful idea! It has a wonderful rhythm. LOVE IT!! ( could you check out my poetry and tell me what you think? Please?)
 
dot.! said...
May 10, 2009 at 2:20 am
wow. i love it. i loooove the emotion you put into this. simply amazing.
comment my poem too if u can! i'd like to hear ur opinion! thanxxx
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped/
 
nxexnxaxj said...
May 10, 2009 at 1:24 am
cute!
 
WriterofWhatsInside said...
May 9, 2009 at 9:57 pm
Wow this one is intresting...nice job check my work out
I only have one Its remember
comment and rate!
 
Batwoman said...
May 9, 2009 at 2:14 pm
I loved this I never thought of you heart in this way thanks so much for teaching me something knew. P.S. your an amazing poet
 
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