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Melancholy Merry-go-round

I peer out my window
the fog shadowing the glass pane
my thoughts are somewhere else
somewhere distant
somewhere new
a simple song plays in my mind
a merry-go-round machine plays the tune,
matching every note with a pleasant feeling that doesn’t quite belong
the grey clouds roll away to reveal a starless night
why did the stars run away?





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screen name said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 12:11 pm
SOMEONE COMMENT! IM LONELY
 
EdytD said...
May 10, 2009 at 2:24 am
I love the ending! Have you ever read "Something Wicked This Way Comes" by Ray Bradbury? Your poem and merry-go-round reminded me of it.

I'd love if you took a look at my poetry. Thanks! :D
 
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