Peace Poem

May 1, 2009
By theclamXX BRONZE, Sudbury, Massachusetts
theclamXX BRONZE, Sudbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
sooo many... just ask me sometime.


When peace is here,
and friends are near,

this world will be a happy place. It will be shown on every face.

When people laugh and wars are ended,
breaks and hurts surely will be mended.

Peace is coming, it's on the way,
very soon hopefully today.

All different races live happily together,
all friends living in peace forever and ever.

The author's comments:
When I first wrote this poem, it was for a school project. I didn't really mean it, I just wanted a good grade. I didn't see the problem with war. But as the year went on, and my education on this topic grew, I learned that this poem was the truth. I hope that readers understand my poem, and I hope that someday it can be published and used to promote world peace.

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on May. 22 2010 at 12:59 pm
theclamXX BRONZE, Sudbury, Massachusetts
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
sooo many... just ask me sometime.

thanx? i guess... haha yeah well it was published a little more than a year ago

Sunshineyday said...
on May. 9 2009 at 4:10 pm
It's not the Greatest poem ever, but it's pretty good. I write alot of pro-peace and anti-war poems myself, I started at age 11, and was writing poems similar to this one, though my range of topics has broadened by today. Keep writing and you will only get better. I give this 4/5.


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