Peace Poem

May 1, 2009
When peace is here,
and friends are near,

this world will be a happy place. It will be shown on every face.

When people laugh and wars are ended,
breaks and hurts surely will be mended.

Peace is coming, it's on the way,
very soon hopefully today.

All different races live happily together,
all friends living in peace forever and ever.





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Olie F. said...
May 22, 2010 at 12:59 pm
thanx? i guess... haha yeah well it was published a little more than a year ago
 
Sunshineyday said...
May 9, 2009 at 4:10 pm
It's not the Greatest poem ever, but it's pretty good. I write alot of pro-peace and anti-war poems myself, I started at age 11, and was writing poems similar to this one, though my range of topics has broadened by today. Keep writing and you will only get better. I give this 4/5.
 
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