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Is it your smile I like the most.
Is it the letters that turns me into toast.
Is it your eyes that melt my soul.
Is it your touch that keeps me whole.
Is it the sparkle I see in your eyes that makes me cry, when you cry.
Is it the chuckle I hear when you laugh that make me just want to Hold your hand.
You're so incrediable I just love you so.
Nothing can stop my love for you.



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:PBUBBLES:P said...
May 10, 2009 at 9:35 pm:
Amazing! You described that feeling really well, and I love how you rhymed the first few lines. I think it might have been nicer if you rhymed the last lines too, but otherwise, GREAT JOB! I love it!
 
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