Is it your eyes.

May 1, 2009
By Abreika GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
Abreika GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
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Is it your smile I like the most.
Is it the letters that turns me into toast.
Is it your eyes that melt my soul.
Is it your touch that keeps me whole.
Is it the sparkle I see in your eyes that makes me cry, when you cry.
Is it the chuckle I hear when you laugh that make me just want to Hold your hand.
You're so incrediable I just love you so.
Nothing can stop my love for you.


The author's comments:
This is one of my many poems, and i would really appreaciate if who ever read it rate it and my other poems.

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on May. 10 2009 at 9:35 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Amazing! You described that feeling really well, and I love how you rhymed the first few lines. I think it might have been nicer if you rhymed the last lines too, but otherwise, GREAT JOB! I love it!


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