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Fire

I got a cut
on my lips
and it tastes like you kiss

But it burns like a fire , like a fire

While its pains
Never ends
Through the days
Till the end

While it burns like a fire, like a fire , like a fire

During the day
During night
Its always there
In sight

And it feels, And it burns like a fire, like a fire

Now I don't know
What it is
All I know is it exists
And it burns like a fire...........




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Abigail_W said...
Jun. 19, 2009 at 1:15 am:
This is great. I'm only twelve, and I've never kissed before, and this gives the feeling to me. By the way, thanks for commenting on my story, "An Unfinished Painting"!
 
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cmoney1996 said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 9:38 pm:
GREAT POEM. This is my 3rd poem I've read of your and you are a praiseworthy, smart, Life knowledgeable person. thet should write a book.
 
sillyrabbit replied...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 6:10 pm :
tank you so much i really appreciate the compliment
 
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hotbaby said...
May 27, 2009 at 11:29 pm:
please rate
 
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