Fire

May 1, 2009
By sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
15 articles 0 photos 49 comments

I got a cut
on my lips
and it tastes like you kiss

But it burns like a fire , like a fire

While its pains
Never ends
Through the days
Till the end

While it burns like a fire, like a fire , like a fire

During the day
During night
Its always there
In sight

And it feels, And it burns like a fire, like a fire

Now I don't know
What it is
All I know is it exists
And it burns like a fire...........



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on Dec. 7 2009 at 6:10 pm
sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
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tank you so much i really appreciate the compliment

on Jun. 19 2009 at 1:15 am
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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This is great. I'm only twelve, and I've never kissed before, and this gives the feeling to me. By the way, thanks for commenting on my story, "An Unfinished Painting"!

on Jun. 11 2009 at 9:38 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

GREAT POEM. This is my 3rd poem I've read of your and you are a praiseworthy, smart, Life knowledgeable person. thet should write a book.

on May. 27 2009 at 11:29 pm
sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
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please rate


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