May 1, 2009
By liza said BRONZE, Amherst, New York
liza said BRONZE, Amherst, New York
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the denial He had when i was born,
refusing to hold me made him seem cruel,
seeing his hatred as i bloomed,
never wanting a daugther of his own,
hating me with everything he wanted,
then my brothers were born,
I thought He'd go perfect,
Because all he wanted was a son,
But i thought wrong,
he treated them worser,
then he was with his own daugthers,
He treated them like they were monsters,
But all they wanted was a loving father,
When his sons turned eleven he walked through the door and never seen again and now we wonder
why was my dad, never a loving father?

The author's comments:
this piece was inspired By my fathers effection in the past never having love for his own kids not me or my sister or brothers me and my sister might not suffer because were older and know how cruel he is But my brothers are still little and confused about this whole world

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