Love is dead

April 30, 2009
By xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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Love is dead,
It was never alive.
For all of you
That believe in it,
Then prove to me where it is.
Because I don't see is
Not in the homicides,
In the suicides,
That happen every day.
I don't see it in the grieving mothers of lost children.
Love is just a word,
A word that teases and plays with peoples' minds,
And forces them to believe
That something they can't see
is there, waiting for them.
Love is what people say keeps them alive,
If that is true,
Then howcome so many people are dead because of its effects?
Love is only a maker of pain and hatred,
A never shamed creation of some cruel god.
It is an everlasting reminder of s
of something we all want,
But can never have.
So why do we all believe in it,
If all it has caused is
Pain and
Heartbrake and
Comfusion?
It leaves neverending scars
and gaping, festering holes
Where our hearts used to be.
and yet,
it's what what we all want,
What we all chase after,
And never give up on.
But love is dead,
It was never alive.


The author's comments:
This poem is what i sometimes think, when i am in a bad mood.

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on Jul. 6 2009 at 10:48 pm
this is rly good! a bit pessimistic lol but i love it! great job!

on Jul. 5 2009 at 5:41 pm
ultrabookworm BRONZE, Equestria, Kentucky
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I really love your style- very outright about what you think. I love it! It's also sad, because I personally think that love is worth all the heartbreak. Of course, that's just my opinion.

on Jul. 2 2009 at 9:57 pm
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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I totally agree with every word written in this poem. You have real talent for writing =]

on Jul. 2 2009 at 3:20 pm
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
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This is amazing! I love it! :) Write some more! :)

lovemoniii said...
on Jun. 30 2009 at 9:08 pm
this is also written very well.

great job ( :

on Jun. 9 2009 at 12:11 am
.Santana. BRONZE, Payette, Idaho
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Amazing(:


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