Make Believe

April 30, 2009
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Mist encircled
her fingertips,
the horn of the unicorn
gleamed in the moonlight
the fairies danced
on the tips
of the grass,
the drops of dew
cascading down
onto the dirt.
The centaurs galloped
behind her
swords in hand
charging towards the
The battle cry rang
and she kicked her mighty
stallion faster towards-
"Dawn, what are you doing?
Get up, and come do
the dishes."
Walking away
he muttered
darn T.V never
worked anyway.

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BleedingRose said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 11:13 am
I love your style, very good! Look at some of mine? Keep writing, this is so good! :D
bookwormdg said...
May 12, 2009 at 1:20 am
THANKS SOOOOO MUCH 4 COMMENTING! it means the world to me that people actually care. THANKS! GOD BLESS YOU!
Anonymous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2009 at 12:41 am
looove this!! great11 perfect.. wish i wrote it
TheRealAriel1995 replied...
Jan. 3, 2013 at 1:20 pm
<3 <3
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