The A, B, C's of Love

I like this poem. It would be great if you added or subtracted some words to make it ring better.

I like the title of this poem. It is creative. I also like how you refrain line one in the last line. Could I give you some advice? Some people, not saying you exactly, love to write poetry and try to rhyme every time. Don't get me wrong, it's good sometimes, but all the time it starts to get hard and you get writer's block. Trying so hard to make words rhyme would make you lose the meaning of your poem. I just want to tell you that, that's all. Please don't take any offense. Anyw... (more »)

creative and hi thanks for commenting on my poem. U should try not to use thee, that's all i think need improvement:)

It was a bit repetive... Try taking some writing tips. may sit with an english teacher and ask for tips.