The A, B, C's of Love

April 30, 2009
A, b, c, d
Why don’t you love me?
E, f, g, h
Is there really so much hate?
I, j, k, l
Why are you giving me h%@
M, n, o, p
Is it possible to hate me?
Q, r, s, t
I love thee
U, v, w, x
I wonder whose you’re going to hurt next
X, y, z
Why don’t you love me?

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Abigail_W said...
Jun. 20, 2009 at 11:49 pm
I like this poem. It would be great if you added or subtracted some words to make it ring better.
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 14, 2009 at 12:19 am
I like the title of this poem. It is creative. I also like how you refrain line one in the last line. Could I give you some advice? Some people, not saying you exactly, love to write poetry and try to rhyme every time. Don't get me wrong, it's good sometimes, but all the time it starts to get hard and you get writer's block. Trying so hard to make words rhyme would make you lose the meaning of your poem. I just want to tell you that, that's all. Please don't take any offense. Anyw... (more »)
darkangel1326 said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 6:48 pm
creative and hi thanks for commenting on my poem. U should try not to use thee, that's all i think need improvement:)
Andrea M. said...
May 15, 2009 at 7:07 pm
It was a bit repetive... Try taking some writing tips. may sit with an english teacher and ask for tips.
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