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O, Sedimentary Rock

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Come hither, my love,
dear sedimentary rock.
From your multiple layers of strata, to your beautifully compacted particles,
You’re perfect.
It’s so… stylish, how you are neatly classified into
three different groups.
Clastic, chemical, or organic, I’m yours for keeping.
No one could possibly love you as much as I do.
Not even the clasts, solutions, or little dead sea creatures,
All from which you are made,
Could feel such an intense passion for you as I.
The ardor is sprouting out like a fountain and flowing over the sides.
I am teeming with it, and you must relieve me.
O, sedimentary rock, I love you so.





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Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 2:39 am
Haha I love this (: You've made such a wonderful and endearing poem about a subject so dull as rocks! I can feel the passion and love for sedimentary rocks. Your word choice is awesome... amazing job!
 
EdytD said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 1:03 am
I love this! I'm pretty sure I commented on it... anyway, it's a great poem, and is incredibly creative!
Though, since this is not about a guy, i really do hope u dont love a rock this much... ;)

By the way, an essay I wrote is now online, so if you want to check it out, i'd love if you do! of course, comments always are welcome! ;D
 
banana This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15, 2009 at 9:00 pm
in response to mikal... haha : ) no it's not, i wrote it for a class assignment on different types of rocks. a little odd, but hey!
 
Mikal said...
May 15, 2009 at 7:02 am
Is this poem about someone? IF so, very well hidden!!! God job!!! Check out my new song in progress: A letter to love
 
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