Saying Goodbye

April 30, 2009
By MedievalMouse94 SILVER, Toms River, New Jersey
MedievalMouse94 SILVER, Toms River, New Jersey
8 articles 3 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart may heal with time, but even the smallest of wounds leaves a scar."


Silence surrounds me as I cry,
Yes, I know why things must die,
But I’m not enjoying this endless hurt,
I can’t stand the thought of you deep under dirt.
I wasn’t ready for you to go,
Oh, my dear, I need you to know,
I loved you so.
I had a chance to say goodbye,
But foolish hope held my mind,
So spread your wings and take flight,
But know I still love you with all of my might.


The author's comments:
I wrote this after one of my cats passed away...

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on Jul. 25 2010 at 6:24 pm
NeverCaredForKool-Aid GOLD, Elkridge, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I don't believe in hell but I believe in my parent's couch-- Watsky

Very beautiful, and the ending was great, the third to last line was my fav!

The one thing I have to say about this is that the most powerful line ("I loved you so") sort of interrupt the flow of the story.


on Apr. 13 2010 at 1:46 pm
raychell.faith GOLD, Somewhere You Left Your Heart, California
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Favorite Quote:
"You Risk Tears If You Let Yourself Be Tamed;" The Little Prince

sweet and sad. <3.


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