April 30, 2009
Days of light soon to come, can you here the gentle hum?
Murmers of freedom sweet, listen to your heart beat.
Between tree leaves, the sun shines through, showing you things you never knew.
Relish the feeling, being lost in your dreams.
Remember that things aren't always as they seem...

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thepreechyteenager said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 6:11 pm
I love how the rhymes seem to come naturally, not forced like so many rhyming poems do.  The relationship etablished with the reader is also very good, esspecially for such a short piece.
MedievalMouse94 replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 6:12 pm
Thank you!
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