Black and White

April 30, 2009
By kookymnstr PLATINUM, Crowder, Oklahoma
kookymnstr PLATINUM, Crowder, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
" One good thing about music, When it hits you, You feel no pain."- Bob Marley


My eyes search the room,
in black and white,
Ill wait for you,
stay up all night,
you'll never come,
but I'll never give in,
even though,
there's no way I can win,
Your love is like toxin,
inside my soul,
the sweat and the tears,
mix in the hole,
where my heart was,
but you cut it out,
with the touch of and angel,
and the strength of my shout,
I screamed all night,
inside my head,
and soaked up tears,
with my bed,
I fake my smile,
the laugh's not the same
you cant be mine
i lost the game


The author's comments:
My inspiration for this piece was my boyfriend dumping me.

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on May. 16 2010 at 5:18 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow, i love this poem-great rythem and rhyming!!!

on Jun. 12 2009 at 10:37 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Hey, that was nice

Jonathanools said...
on Jun. 10 2009 at 2:29 pm
Wow that was the best poem I've ever read it's so raw and emotional you jus made it to my favorites I hope to see lots more from you! î„…

Mini:) said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 1:37 am
Omg autumn this an amzing poem i abouslty adore it :) keep writing

on May. 9 2009 at 12:25 am
kookymnstr PLATINUM, Crowder, Oklahoma
27 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
" One good thing about music, When it hits you, You feel no pain."- Bob Marley

hi im autumn best poem ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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