The Key

May 1, 2009
By Imani Reese BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
Imani Reese BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Locked in a cage,our daddy was in pain Sorrow and Suffering looking,looking for the key.I'm glad he looked up to the lord our god was the key.He opened the cage and our daddy was free.

The author's comments:
It has not been easy living with a father. Especially after losing him the day after christmas in 2005.Every day i am pround that i can handle the world with out him even through i miss him. R.I.P Daddy

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Jaquie BRONZE said...
on May. 8 2009 at 1:26 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Wow. I'm not going to say I understand your pain. Because there is no way that I can. But this did describe your pain so fully that I believe I got as close as I could get to understanding your pain. Not only was this touching, but it also made me appreciate the relationship I have with my father even though he isn't the best sometimes. Keep writing.

God Bless,



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