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I attack what i cannot see
Bleed out of what is not me
Fight with all my might
Even though not an enemy is in sight





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Breebear said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 3:23 pm
haha i love how alot of your poems are so short and to the point
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 12:59 am
maybe changing the line even though not an enemy is in sight to even though there is no enemy in sight would be better than the original   but other than that it's a good poem   captures the reality of being a teenager
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 10:22 pm
This is pretty good. You are so talented.
 
blackamethyst said...
May 8, 2009 at 1:27 am
amazing
 
:PBUBBLES:P said...
May 8, 2009 at 1:11 am
I love this poem, it's so short and it has a lot behind the actual words, you can find whatever meaning in it! I like the way you describe teens, too. AMAZING!!
 
banana This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2009 at 10:47 pm
the thoughts behind this are good, but working on the rhythm and flow could make it much stronger!
 
xxJustxxMe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2009 at 10:42 pm
this is kewl
 
-xlimitless239x- said...
May 7, 2009 at 9:57 pm
it's an okay poem. check out mines.
 
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