Pain

April 27, 2009
By GodsWarrior24 BRONZE, Kearney, Nebraska
GodsWarrior24 BRONZE, Kearney, Nebraska
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So far away from you I can barely withstand it
But this is what I get for acting like such a bandit
The things I did in the past I truly regret
Now I am paying my debt
Being away from you makes me wanna cry
But all I do is just try
I try to make it back to you so you can stop hurting too
I just want you back in my arms so I can also say
I love you boo boo
I push to be towards you
But PAIN won’t let me be
I suffer, you suffer, something I don’t want
Something you don’t need
But babe you make my life complete
You give me a place to sleep when I am out on the street
So I walk up to say I love you
And you say I love you 2
I wish I could give you a gentle kiss
But I’m lost in PAIN’S abyss
PAIN tries to keep me away
But that’s one game I’m not willing to play
So I continue to be with you
I even tell you I love you
I ask you to marry me
All I hear you say is “oh baby”
I tell you to say yes this is one thing I won’t regret
PAIN can’t keep me from my love
Cause Angelita is the love of my life
PAIN will never keep me from her
I always make sure
I love her she loves me
Now PAIN will let us be I love you baby


The author's comments:
I wrote this because me and my girlfriend are in a hard spot right now and this is what we are both feeling at this point in time.

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on May. 15 2009 at 4:11 pm
GodsWarrior24 BRONZE, Kearney, Nebraska
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so thats cool so wats new???

on May. 14 2009 at 6:52 pm
MisunderstoodBeauty BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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yeah it could be in teen ink book

on May. 12 2009 at 2:33 pm
GodsWarrior24 BRONZE, Kearney, Nebraska
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thanks for the comments you think it can be in the teen ink book???

on May. 9 2009 at 4:53 am
MisunderstoodBeauty BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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i seriously dropped a tear reading this.... im glad your happy becuz happiness makes the world go round

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on May. 8 2009 at 5:24 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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aaaawwwwww thats really sweet.

seems like you really love her. if i were her...i'd come back. lol:)

on May. 7 2009 at 10:52 pm
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
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"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."

this is nice ^_^

on May. 7 2009 at 8:59 pm
Wow, not many poems can almost make me want to cry but considering that ive been there a few times before this one did. Very nice


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