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If sparrows fly on silent wings
then shouldn't phoenix glide with burning glory?
If the color silver is sleek and silent
then shouldn't red be strong and proud?
The meek, lonely one, on the back of a horse,
but the regal one, left all alone?
Why is the princess so fiercely rejected,
while the servant so easily accepted?





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<3::wish4wings::<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 8, 2009 at 6:57 pm
i like it. idk what it means. lol but i still like it for some reason
 
*LunaNight* said...
May 8, 2009 at 1:20 pm
it says to me that your questioning the way the world works. we all do hat,but your the one who actually put it in words. bravo.
 
-xlimitless239x- said...
May 7, 2009 at 10:10 pm
i guess it's okay. i'm not a tough critic, but i think you could do better.
 
Sparrow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 7:07 pm
so, so true... i feel mediocre allll the time. thanks for not being a cushy person trying to butter me up!
 
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