I Grew a Tree

April 26, 2009
By GoldenD BRONZE, Livingston, New Jersey
GoldenD BRONZE, Livingston, New Jersey
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I grew a Tree,
not just any old Tree,
but a Money Tree.

It started as a Seed...

My Seed grew into a Sapling,
not any old Sapling,
but a Magical Sapling.

My Sapling became a Bush,
not any old Bush,
but a Bop-It Bush.

My Bush became an Elm,
not any old Elm,
but a Monster Elm.

My Elm became an Oak,
not any old Oak,
but an Oak that gave a Seed...

I grew a Tree,
not any old Tree,
but a Money Tree.

The author's comments:
As a lover of nature, I would look outside and think about how beautiful the world was. I started to think about writing down what I feel in a poem, where anything can happen as long as I believed it. This is a poem from my Heart and Soul, and I deliver it to you now.

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GoldenD BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 7:41 pm
GoldenD BRONZE, Livingston, New Jersey
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no prob u can analyze all u want lol

GoldenD BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 7:40 pm
GoldenD BRONZE, Livingston, New Jersey
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thanks again :D

GoldenD BRONZE said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 9:12 pm
GoldenD BRONZE, Livingston, New Jersey
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Hey, that's a good idea! That would be funny. "Lalala, a bop...it...bush." lol thanks for commenting, and check out my sister's work too its amazing she's Edyt D

on Aug. 14 2009 at 12:03 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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haha, that was really cute. thoughtful. i think if you spread it around more, it might become a little song children will sing. love it! (:

Joanna said...
on Aug. 13 2009 at 10:54 pm
Joanna, St. Catharines, Other
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I just wanted to tell you how much it means to me that you commented on my writing. Thank-you so very much, my friend.

And once again, beautiful poem.

GoldenD BRONZE said...
on Aug. 12 2009 at 6:33 pm
GoldenD BRONZE, Livingston, New Jersey
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Thanks so much 4 ur coments i really apreciate them!

on Jun. 30 2009 at 3:49 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

I loved it. How it ended up at the beginning in the end? It made perfect sense.Very good! :D

Joanna said...
on Jun. 25 2009 at 1:11 am
Joanna, St. Catharines, Other
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Ahaha! I like this very much. Were you trying to connect the material world with nature when speaking about the "Money Tree" and such?

I'm sorry, I'm analyzing.

on May. 29 2009 at 10:08 pm
hey_itskatelyn PLATINUM, Willis, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“God, of your goodness, give me yourself; you are enough for me, and anything less that I could ask for would not do you full honour. And if I ask anything that is less, I shall always lack something, but in you alone I have everything”

Golden D, you should post more stuff on teenink so i can comment on ALL of it lol

I just wanted to send you a SUPER THANKS for taking the time to comment on SO much of my work. It means a lot, thanks:)

GoldenD BRONZE said...
on May. 26 2009 at 12:29 am
GoldenD BRONZE, Livingston, New Jersey
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Lol. Thanks for commenting on my work. I really appreciate it. I will try to take a look at your articles/poems and comment on them when I can.

on May. 17 2009 at 7:48 pm
hey_itskatelyn PLATINUM, Willis, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“God, of your goodness, give me yourself; you are enough for me, and anything less that I could ask for would not do you full honour. And if I ask anything that is less, I shall always lack something, but in you alone I have everything”

A bop-it bush? I know nothing about plants. lol

But i do know that i love the repetition and how you ended with the same lines you started with. Thanks so much for commenting on iLove. Check out some of my other stuff if you have time. GOOD WORK:)

EdytD SILVER said...
on May. 10 2009 at 11:37 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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A bop-it bush?

it's really neat - I love the repetition - it creates a cycle. If you played with it, you could make each line a haiku (5 sylables, 7 sylables, 5 sylables). Great job! :D




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