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I look to the east and see the sun,
A shimmering ball of fire.
Marking that the night is done,
As the sun floats ever higher.

All my problems seem to disappear,
With the darkness which is fading.
It's a fresh new start as opportunities appear,
Sunrise marks a new day in the making.



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jonas_chic899 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 5:27 pm:
love this too!!!!!!!!!:) u got good writing skillz
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:38 pm :
Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
 
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The~crayon~in~my~heart said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 8:59 am:
i like it and it has a nice feeling, bt maybe you could se even better word choice?
 
little-miss-sunshine replied...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 11:35 am :
In what way would you say better word choice? Do you mean more sophisticated? Or does it just not flow right to you? Please elaborate so I can improve my writing. 
 
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Malory_Sturling said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 9:31 pm:
another amazing poem! WOW! i LOVE this one! =D
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:38 pm :
Thank you. This is also one of my favorites.
 
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READ*WRITE*LOVE*GREEN said...
May 16, 2009 at 5:30 pm:
Great job, Karen!! I love this poem, it's very beautiful. Keep it up!!
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:37 pm :
Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
 
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