Sunrise

April 26, 2009
By Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!


I look to the east and see the sun,
A shimmering ball of fire.
Marking that the night is done,
As the sun floats ever higher.

All my problems seem to disappear,
With the darkness which is fading.
It's a fresh new start as opportunities appear,
Sunrise marks a new day in the making.


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on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:38 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Thanks! I appreciate the comment!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:38 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Thank you. This is also one of my favorites.

on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:37 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Thanks! I appreciate the comment!

on Apr. 19 2010 at 5:27 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

love this too!!!!!!!!!:) u got good writing skillz

on Mar. 27 2010 at 11:35 am
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

In what way would you say better word choice? Do you mean more sophisticated? Or does it just not flow right to you? Please elaborate so I can improve my writing. 

on Mar. 14 2010 at 8:59 am
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“We accept the love we think we deserve.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

i like it and it has a nice feeling, bt maybe you could se even better word choice?

on Sep. 11 2009 at 9:31 pm
Malory_Sturling BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Good writing can make you look at something unbelievable and doubt yourself by believing that it is real." ♥

"You can get a thousand compliments, but one failure can tear you down; don't let it."
~Malory Sturling ♥

another amazing poem! WOW! i LOVE this one! =D

on May. 16 2009 at 5:30 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Great job, Karen!! I love this poem, it's very beautiful. Keep it up!!


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