The Ocean Tide

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The ocean tide washes over,
Banks of crystal white sand.
Gentle waves reach out,
covering the land.

The salty water brings,
Fish and rocks and shells.
The sight so very pretty,
I hear the sound of bells.

Moonlight streams down,
Glistening of a wave.
A place of natural beauty,
A place worth to save.





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The~crayon~in~my~heart said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 8:58 am
i like it, but it seems to just be a description, although a good one. if you wanted it tohave a feeling yo would probobly have to change it some
 
little-miss-sunshine replied...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 11:10 am
My last line a place worth to save is supposed to be showing the feeling. I meant the first part to be describing the beach, and it's beauty, and the last line to show how we should be saving the natural beauties still around us, like this beach. I'm sorry if that didn't get across to well.
 
Malory_Sturling said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 9:30 pm
wow! that was amazing, simple, yet beautiful...simplicity can at times say most. =D
 
chocolateharp replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 7:05 pm
This is beautiful! I can picture the beach and waves as I read it. :)
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:36 pm
Thank you! I appreciate the comments! 
 
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