Awaken

By brigeisfalling, San Juan Capistrano, CA

The gnarled bark
Dark,
Ancient,
Full of life
Cool to the touch.
The moon
Light of the night
The source
The love
Stars
Sparkle scatters
Then,
You
Black hair
Jet black
As the dead of night
flowing, spiraling
around the ancient.
White dress
becomes you
as does life.
Coming together
You, tree and moon
Your goddess
But
do you have
room for me?

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Jennaaa said...
Aug. 18, 2009 at 5:15 am:

definitely my favorite of yours...
the line breaks are quite unique!
really beautiful images here :]

perhaps you should check out some of my work (although the poems aren't up yet, should be soon)

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Meagan:] said...
Jun. 20, 2009 at 9:29 pm:

This poem is an amazing piece of work. I enjoyed it thoroughly! :)

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francheeze88 said...
May 12, 2009 at 11:21 pm:

WOW this is awesome. Its so simple and clean, but its beautiful none the less.

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Briisfalling said...
May 11, 2009 at 4:37 pm:

Thanks so much for your comment! You have made my day so much better. I am so glad you told me you have stuff up. I love your poems!

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xXxFallingTearsxXx said...
May 7, 2009 at 4:23 am:

I really like your new poems!! i love the way you write, you have true talent, keep going!! And i have some new work up if you wanted to know. well i don't know why you would want to know that, but still, you should read it anyways!