Awaken

April 29, 2009
By brigeisfalling GOLD, San Juan Capistrano, California
brigeisfalling GOLD, San Juan Capistrano, California
17 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never be bullied into silence. Never allow yourself to be made a victim. Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself." ~Harvey Fierstein

"Never forget how beautiful you are" ~Gerard Way


The gnarled bark
Dark,
Ancient,
Full of life
Cool to the touch.
The moon
Light of the night
The source
The love
Stars
Sparkle scatters
Then,
You
Black hair
Jet black
As the dead of night
flowing, spiraling
around the ancient.
White dress
becomes you
as does life.
Coming together
You, tree and moon
Your goddess
But
do you have
room for me?


The author's comments:
An image came to my mind and I thought I could draw it but my drawing skills are not up to par with my imagination so a poem came out instead.

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Jennax3 SILVER said...
on Aug. 18 2009 at 5:15 am
Jennax3 SILVER, Palos Verdes Estates, California
6 articles 0 photos 114 comments
definitely my favorite of yours...

the line breaks are quite unique!

really beautiful images here :]



perhaps you should check out some of my work (although the poems aren't up yet, should be soon)

on Jun. 20 2009 at 9:29 pm
hullothere GOLD, Bam, Washington
13 articles 0 photos 15 comments
This poem is an amazing piece of work. I enjoyed it thoroughly! :)

on May. 12 2009 at 11:21 pm
francheeze88 SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
5 articles 6 photos 21 comments
WOW this is awesome. Its so simple and clean, but its beautiful none the less.

on May. 11 2009 at 4:37 pm
brigeisfalling GOLD, San Juan Capistrano, California
17 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never be bullied into silence. Never allow yourself to be made a victim. Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself." ~Harvey Fierstein

"Never forget how beautiful you are" ~Gerard Way

Thanks so much for your comment! You have made my day so much better. I am so glad you told me you have stuff up. I love your poems!

on May. 7 2009 at 4:23 am
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
12 articles 0 photos 148 comments
I really like your new poems!! i love the way you write, you have true talent, keep going!! And i have some new work up if you wanted to know. well i don't know why you would want to know that, but still, you should read it anyways!


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