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the hollow awakening

April 29, 2009
By badlands SILVER, Kerrville, Texas
badlands SILVER, Kerrville, Texas
9 articles 1 photo 2 comments

the lemon blossum
white agionst her yellow hand
a smile on her lips
the doctors had said a week
a week to enjoy the spring

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the lemon blossum
i hope that she will outlast
that fragile flower

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the lemon blossum
white agionst her yellow hand
a smile on her lips
in the silence i woke
the lemon blossum still there

The author's comments:
A story told by two senyrus and a haiku,of a love fading away by desease,so fragile that even a small flower outlasts her.

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on May. 7 2009 at 12:57 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

You are a REALLY good writer! You even made the description of the poem sound poetic...whether you intebded to or not. The poem was very touching. Keep it up!


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