a NEW KID

April 28, 2009
By KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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He feels he is in a morbid environment.
Carving out thoughts that shall be used
As prizing truths by him later on,
He depicts what shall become of him.
Every student stares: there is no other attraction,
But the new kid is hopeful,
Because now he has some of his own criticism.



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PK4evr ELITE said...
on Jun. 4 2009 at 2:14 pm
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

Sounds like the poem I wrote: TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/79949/Hey-New-Kid. Only mine's super long and it's from my POV. And yes, I totally understand. Love how it's short and sweet. Thanks for your comment on my poem way back in the day.


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