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Once upon a time in a world
Where everything goes wrong
Where I will never belong
Death rules over all
Where the Light hides
From the Darkness
This world was made
From the hate in Man

When we fall
We never try again
This was aou mistake
The Son of Sorrows chance to take
Away everything we hold close

We've given up hope
Losing our war with Hate
This worlds a place taken
From bad to worse

Without hope we fall
Into Dispair
When I live a day in pain
I remember how we
Failed to Live





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Jandem said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 2:28 pm
Sad. But good. You have a typo, in the third line of the second stanza. I assume its supposed to be "our". That is how I read it.
 
Shannon_ replied...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 2:29 pm
yep thanks!
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 3:13 pm
nice. i like it.
 
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