Smoke

April 27, 2009
By GoldenGirl PLATINUM, Vashon, Washington
GoldenGirl PLATINUM, Vashon, Washington
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Smoke
smoke in
that smoke is never coming out
no matter what it was
that you smoked
it'll kill you, no joke
that smoke will choke
your liver and lung
it might not set fire
but everything will die
from that smoke inhalation
smoke
smoke it, that's it
nice and deep,
breathe in that smoke
smoke
smoke in
that smoke is never coming out.


The author's comments:
I know, kinda boring compared to other stuff I've written, but it's about something important, and it's not fiction.

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on Jul. 31 2009 at 11:54 pm
wnafeelweightless19 BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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i love it! its simple but very powerful. to me at least. it speaks to me




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