Death Note

April 16, 2009
By Gothic_Princess BRONZE, Bainbridge, Ohio
Gothic_Princess BRONZE, Bainbridge, Ohio
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There stands a door
At the end of a hall,
Inside lies a girl
Whose mother will call,
No answer will come
So the mother will go,
Find a knife in her hand
And her blood on the floor.

She'll weep and she'll cry
And say its not true,
Find a note by her side
And a pen at her shoe,
She wont read the note
Cuz she knows what it said,
It says she the reason
Her daughter is dead.

The note tells a story
That she should have read,
It told the true reason
That her daughter is dead,
It was not the mother
That caused her to die,
It was her best friend
Who started a lie.

Now all that is left
Is a note by her side,
And a mother to wonder
Why her daughter had died

The author's comments:
Okay,so as a Teenager you get depressed. Well i got beyond depressed and linger there off and on and during one of my lows i wrote this. It is my favorite out of all my poems and i think it really hits dead on with alot of suicides. Most of my writing has gone dark and gloomy,but its my outlet and it helps,plus i get great pieces like this!

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on Jul. 4 2009 at 12:06 am
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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Wow, this poem is amazing. Great job I can totally relate with what you said in your authors comment.

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